Logline for The Florida Bride, Motosu Mystery #4:

While on holiday, Helen Motosu investigates the disappearance of a young Japanese bride who vanishes before her wedding at the Yamato Agricultural Colony in south Florida.

This is already the second version of the logline, and I’m sure it will change again as I actually write the book during November and December. Some aspects that will stay the same: my sleuth Helen takes a vacation to Florida to visit a cousin, a Japanese girl disappears before her arranged marriage, and the main setting is the Yamato Colony that existed near what is now Boca Raton, Florida.