Character Exercise: Enemies & Rivals

In August, I’m preparing for working on a new project this fall by doing a character building challenge on Instagram. I will be starting the first book in a contemporary mystery series set in St. Augustine Beach, Florida. The sleuth is twenty-something Sadie Lennox, who moves home to the beach to help her uncle run his diner. Her father, who worked as chef at the diner, is recently deceased, leaving his wife and daughters to grieve him. Sadie is a recovering social media addict, and she’s trying to build a better life for herself while also trying to mend her broken relationships with her family.

The point of the challenge is to get to know the character better, and since Sadie is brand new to me, she’s a perfect candidate.

Day 1: Who are your MC’s enemies and rivals?

As part of her social media addiction recovery, Sadie is learning how to develop positive relationships and avoid toxicity. Part of this is letting go of past grudges and negative influences. After graduating from college, Sadie used her marketing degree to go into advertising, but she eventually found herself a small amount of fame as an Instagram influencer. Many of the relationships that Sadie established during this time ended up having detrimental effects on her. One of the first things she did in recovery was to sever all ties with the majority of the people she’d once considered her friends. She now realizes that SHE was the one that most people would have considered an enemy or rival, and she intends to learn how to be a better friend going forward.

I can’t reveal much about the enemies that Sadie will make over the course of the series — they’re mysteries, after all! I plan for the series to be eight books, so that means that Sadie will encounter at least eight murderers who will definitely consider her an enemy by the time she’s done with them.

Widow's Weeds Cover Reveal!

It’s here! The cover for WIDOW’S WEEDS is ready for its big reveal!

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This beautiful cover was designed by Jessica Bell Design, and I am absolutely in love with it! It captures the story’s setting so perfectly. I am so very proud of this book, and I cannot wait to send it out into the world! WIDOW’S WEEDS will be released on September 1st, 2020 in both ebook and paperback form!

#indieauthorMAYketers Day 15

Today’s photo challenge prompt is Mood Board.

I’m not making mood boards for Widow’s Weeds, because it’s pretty much done other than final edits, and I don’t need a mood board for it right now. I usually use mood boards as inspiration for what I’m currently drafting or rewriting.

So today, you’re getting a sneak peek of Book 2 in the Motosu Mystery series, which is currently in the 2nd draft stage.

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Day 5: Blurb Intro

This is the blurb that will appear on the back cover of Widow’s Weeds:

Helen Motosu is in deep mourning after the death of her husband, private investigator Shigeru Motosu. Restricted to caring for her young children and keeping her brother-in-law from his self-destructive habits, Helen feels stagnant and unchallenged.

Until the charismatic Mitsuo Okabe requests the Motosus' help in solving the murder of his brother, an energy scientist working on a solar-powered bullet train. The main suspect is a Russian prostitute who was with Dr. Okabe the night he died. Mitsuo knows that his brother had enemies in the city, rivals in the development of new energy technologies. The Russian refuses to cooperate with the Japanese police, but perhaps another foreign woman can convince her to reveal what she witnessed that night.

Helen has never actively investigated anything on her own. To solve this rime, she must navigate Japan's scientific circles while maintaining her own precarious social position. Without her, an innocent woman could lose her life, and a violent murderer will be free to kill again.

#indieauthorMAYketers Day 3

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Day 3: BOOK INTRO

The first book of my alternate history mystery series will release in September 2020. I haven't revealed the book cover yet, so I thought I'd give a little sneak peek!

WIDOW'S WEEDS is set in Japan in 1907, in a world in which technology has developed a bit further and faster. It's more a post-steampunk world, with solar power an up-and-coming alternative energy source. The book introduces widow Helen Motosu, who is coming out of deep mourning and wondering what the future holds for her. She doesn't expect to be drawn into the investigation of the murder of an engineer working on the development of a solar-powered bullet train.

Many thanks to Jessica Bell Designs for the amazing covers for this series! I can't wait to share them with you!

#indieauthorMAYketers Day 1

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Well, that's me. I'm Sara, I live in Texas, and I write about murder. I dabble in both historical and contemporary, and right now I'm focusing on a mystery series set in alternate history Japan. The first book will be released in September 2020!

I'm a plotter, complete with outlines, scene cards, and an ever-present copy of Save the Cat on my desk. I overwrite like nobody's business, so it's a good thing I love editing!

I've been writing stories since I could hold a pencil, and its always been my dream to be an author. I studied English in college, with a minor in creative writing. I was a teacher for most of my professional working life, in public schools before moving to Japan to teach at a conversation school for three years. In Japan, I met my husband, and we moved back to the US after we got married.

I'm now a stay-at-home mom to a 6-year-old who keeps me busy with homeschooling and not-writing. Fortunately, she's coming to an age where she understands that my work is important to me, and she's learning to respect my writing hours.

Welcome to the website. I’ll be trying to spend a little more time here as the release of my first book draws nearer. Keep an eye out for updates!

Preptober Day 13: Writing Books

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These are the first writing reference books I bought, the Howdunit series from Writer’s Digest. I didn’t get the all at once as a group but over the course of my junior and senior years of high school. Some of these books are 20 years old! I can’t remember the first one I bought, possibly the Police Procedural one? Because I was such a huge fan of Law & Order and In the Heat of the Night. These books set me on the path of writing mysteries, and I still keep them close on the bookshelf behind my desk. I can’t imagine not having them close at hand, just in case I need them!

Preptober Day 12: NaNo Fuel

Coffee. Always coffee. I don’t need anything else.

Although, tea is also nice sometimes, especially if I’ve already had my coffee for the day. I’m very partial to the Twinnings Buttermint tea, with a little cream and sugar. I like sweet drinks.

My coffee drink of choice depends on where I’m writing. If I’m at home, I make an iced coffee with cream and maple syrup. If I’m at a cafe, it’s a latte with caramel syrup, iced or hot, depending on the time of year. I usually write at a Starbucks, and my favorite Starbucks drink is the Chestnut Praline latte they do in November and December. I love that drink so very much. It reminds me of a drink I used to get at a cafe near my apartment in Japan.

I don’t often snack while writing. It’s not unusual for me to forget about my stomach completely while I’m in the writing zone.

Preptober Day 10: Inspiration

Inspiration finds me in several ways, but locations tend to inspire me the most. Often, it’s comes from the places I’ve lived in or traveled to, less from pictures of places I’ve never actually experienced. The Motosu Mysteries came into being while I was living in Japan, and many of the settings I have planned for that series are also some of my favorite places in Japan. I also have plans for a contemporary murder mystery series set in the city I currently live in, and I would love to work on a series - either historical or contemporary - set in St. Augustine, Florida where I went to college and lived for seven years. It’s a beautiful town with a lot of history, and I always feel inspired when I’m visiting there again.

The courtyard of Flagler College, formerly the Hotel Ponce de Leon. Someday, I’ll set a mystery here!

The courtyard of Flagler College, formerly the Hotel Ponce de Leon. Someday, I’ll set a mystery here!

Preptober Day 9: Logline

Logline for The Florida Bride, Motosu Mystery #4:

While on holiday, Helen Motosu investigates the disappearance of a young Japanese bride who vanishes before her wedding at the Yamato Agricultural Colony in south Florida.

This is already the second version of the logline, and I’m sure it will change again as I actually write the book during November and December. Some aspects that will stay the same: my sleuth Helen takes a vacation to Florida to visit a cousin, a Japanese girl disappears before her arranged marriage, and the main setting is the Yamato Colony that existed near what is now Boca Raton, Florida.

Preptober Day 8: Writing Music

I actually don’t like writing to music all that much! I prefer ambient sounds or background noise. I can write in a busy, noisy Starbucks without getting distracted at all. It’s how I used to write in college - I would go to Barnes & Noble with a pen and notebook, and I’d write for four hours. For a long time, I didn’t have a laptop or an iPod or anything else to turn off the B&N noise, so I just got used to it. And now I sometimes think I write better with all the background noise. When I do have my earbuds in, I’m usually listening to ambient noise channels on YouTube. And sometimes I’m not actually listening to anything, but having the earbuds in keeps random people from talking to me, which is a distraction, particularly at NaNoWriMo write-ins!

Preptober Day 6: Biggest Distractions

Family, all the time. The best kind of distraction to have!

I have a husband and a homeschooled 5-year old daughter (who will be six in November! I did not plan to have a NaNoWriMo baby, but she came three weeks early to make sure she didn’t miss it!), and being a stay-at-home mom takes up a lot of my time. I wouldn’t change this for anything; I love that I am able to stay home and homeschool my daughter, and I know how lucky I am to be able to do it.

But there are some days I don’t get any writing work done because I’m busy with housekeeping or teaching my daughter. I have to keep an eye on that kind of thing, that I’m not going multiple days without writing or otherwise working on a book. If I take a couple of days off from writing, it’s harder for me to get back into the flow. My schedule is a bit all over the place - each day is different from the one before! - which is why I use an hourly planner to know where my time is going each day. Some days, we’re constantly on the go, other days we’re at home taking care of housework. I plan my writing around the times I know I’m going to be busy with other things. It’s all about balance. Sometimes I look forward to a break from writing to spend time with the ones I love! Family time is important too!

Preptober Day 5: Goals

In the 17 years that I have participated in National Novel Writing Month, I have always stuck to the 50000 word goal, even though none of my manuscripts have ever been finished at that count. This year, I want to finish a manuscript draft, which means going after 90000 words total. That is never going to happen in one month, so I’m giving myself until December 31st to do it. My actual goal for November is 54000, which I’ve done before and think I can do again. The real challenge will be doing another 36000 in December. I have done 30000+ words in a month before, but never on the heels of NaNoWriMo. Also, my Decembers tend to be busier than my Novembers, adding even more to the difficulty level of this endeavor. But I want to see if I can do it, so I’m going to go after that daunting number 90000 and see what happens!

Preptober Day 3: Genre

Over the years, I’ve written in a lot of different genres. I even wrote fanfiction for a while, including for one (unsuccessful) NaNoWriMo. For a long time, fantasy was my preference, inspired by The Chronicles of Narnia and In the Land of Unicorns. Then, in high school, I started watching Law & Order and In the Heat of the Night, and I was bitten by the mystery bug. I wrote fantasy for a while after that, but then, for NaNoWriMo 2009, I plotted a steampunky murder mystery set in late-Meiji era Japan. It wasn’t my first NaNo win, but it was my most successful (56000 words written!), and I’ve been enamored with mystery ever since. I have plans for historical mysteries (starting with the steampunk, which has become less steampunky over time) and contemporary mysteries in the future.

Preptober Day 2: Plotter or Pantser?

Do I plot or do I pants? Or do I do a bit of both?

I prefer to plot. A lot. I like having my plot points ready to go, my scene cards written out and assembled in order. I like to know what I’m working on next when I sit down for a writing session, and plotting helps with that. My first draft doesn’t always follow the outline, and things definitely change for the second (and third and fourth and so on) draft, but it helps me to have one to start with. So I do my best in October to get as much plotting and outlining done as possible.

Plotting tools: outline worksheets from Heart Breathings, scene cards, and project notebook.

Plotting tools: outline worksheets from Heart Breathings, scene cards, and project notebook.

Preptober Day 1: All About You


Preptober is upon us! It is time to prepare for the marathon of writing: National Novel Writing Month! Next month, so many writers around the world will be attempting to write 50,000 words in 30 days!

This is my favorite time of year. I love NaNoWriMo season. It’s been a part of my life for a very long time, and it has become a yearly tradition that I just can’t do without. I look forward to October every year, when I begin to plan out the story I’ll be working on in November.

My local ML (municipal liaison, the one tasked with wrangling the Wrimos of their given region) shared an Instagram challenge from author Rachel Bateman, who created it for her local region. I decided to take on the challenge too. I’ve been posting responses to the prompts on my Instagram, but I thought it might be nice to do it here too, since I’ve been neglecting this site since I went on vacation at the beginning of October.

Day #1 is All About You.

This will be my 17th NaNoWriMo. My first time was in 2003, when I was in college and one of my friends heard about it from one of our teachers and convinced a bunch of us to do it. I wrote 17,000 words, but it was the most I’d ever written on a story, and I was hooked. It's been a fall tradition ever since. I have written in a variety of genres, and I’ve even been a rebel a couple of times, but now I stick to mysteries, historical and contemporary. I also always start a new project, because I’ve found I’m more successful that way. This year, I'll be working on book 4 in an alternate history mystery series set in Japan in 1908.

When I’m not distracted by NaNoWriMo, I'm a stay-at-home mom who balances writing with homeschooling. I live in Texas, but my heart is in Japan, where I lived for three years and met and married my husband. We would love to live there again someday. I have one living daughter and one daughter who was born sleeping. I am going to self-publish my first book next summer, which is both exciting and terrifying and what this website is all about. Life is rarely dull, and I'm always curious what tomorrow will bring.

What I Write

The first stories I remember writing were about horses. I was seven, and I was obsessed with horses. (I am still slightly obsessed with horses, but I am more practical about what it takes to own one, so none of that for me right now.) I read many MANY horse-related books, and that was how I discovered The Chronicles of Narnia. A Horse and His Boy is still my favorite Narnia story. I started writing fantasy because of it.

Once I started writing, I didn’t stop. I wrote at every opportunity, even in the middle of class. Especially math class. I became skilled at not getting caught writing (or reading) in class. Those early stories were short and not very nuanced, but they were practice, and every writer needs to practice. In middle school, I started writing poetry, but it was never something I was serious about.

By the time I was in high school, I knew I wanted to be a writer. It was the only thing I could imagine myself doing as an adult. I was encouraged to write, but as it came time for me to go to college, I wasn’t encouraged to be a writer. I was told all the things most young writers are told: “you won’t make money writing,” “writing’s not a real job,” “teaching would be a better career.”

When I went to college, I planned to become an English teacher. I majored in English and Secondary Education, because that was what seemed like the appropriate thing to do. Except I didn’t like my Education classes, and when my counselor asked me why I wanted to be a teacher, I told her I didn’t. I just wanted to write.

And she said, “So write. We offer Creative Writing courses, do that instead.”

So I did. I dropped the Secondary Education part of my degree and stuck to English, Psychology, and Creative Writing courses (with the odd History and Anthropology course thrown in). I took part in my first National Novel Writing Month in 2003 - I wrote 16,000 words, which did not make me a winner, but it was the most I had ever written on a story before, and I was happy.

I wrote fantasy almost exclusively through my 20’s, aside from an interlude in my first year of college during which I wrote Star Wars fanfiction. I read much more than fantasy, and I regularly watched Law & Order and In the Heat of the Night, my introduction to the world of mysteries. I didn’t like reading police procedurals, though, preferring cozies and historicals, but I didn’t think much about writing them. Then, while I was living in Japan, a student introduced me to Agatha Christie. I almost immediately stopped writing straight fantasy and switched over to murder mysteries.

I wrote my first murder mystery during NaNoWriMo in 2009. It was a steampunk mystery set in the latter part of the Meiji period in Japan. I was inspired by the recent release of Sherlock Holmes and the country I was living in at the time. I wouldn’t have considered myself a fan of steampunk - and I’m not sure I would now either. I’m not all that interested in the tech, more the setting and the tone, the aesthetic. That story has evolved over time, and now it’s more “alternate history” than straight-up steampunk.

It was the first novel I ever finished, the first one I ever edited, the first one I ever let other people read. Next year, it will be the first book I self-publish.

Pretty much everything I write now is a historical mystery, alternate history or otherwise. I do have half a manuscript for a cozy mystery that might see more development in the future, but for now, I’m sticking with historical mysteries.

My first mystery series is alternate history, set in Japan in 1907. The first book has recently gone through its fifth draft and has been handed over to a handful of beta readers. It will be ready to publish in the summer of 2020.

I am currently working on a draft for Book Two, which should be finished before this year’s NaNoWriMo, when I plan to get the first 50,000 words of Book Four. (What about Book Three? I already have a half-finished draft for that, and since I like to start new projects in November, I’m saving the rest of Book Three for next year.)

I have done some work for other historical mystery series, but I’ll be saving those for 2021 and beyond.